About the idea that 'wires have become obsolete' in a humanly REAL idea of the future (Discussed in character design class); There's nothing wrong, unless you intended the character to be in a bio-friendly, Aeon Flux, kind of era. In that case, increase the story's depth. (I know you know this. I'm just flapping my gums)
You gotta be anything BUT disappointed in a piece of work like this. Great work!